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Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex eventually landing in the day before

 

Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia. The snow was bright green

 

There seems to be a continuity error now… Because it takes time to copy and paste and then somebody else has already added the extra lines before yours. So we have

Landing in the day before
Landing In Siberia. The snow

I added my line to the snow not seeing the comment about the day before.

Is it permissible to rewrite the story to say
landing in Siberia the day before. The snow was bright green

 

Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia the day before. The snow was bright green

 

Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia the day before. The snow was bright green and sour, so

 

Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia the day before. The snowwas bright green and sour, so he ate it.

 

Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia the day before. The snow was bright green and sour, so he ate it. So tell me

 

Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia the day before. The snow was bright green and sour, so he ate it. So tell me, what is the

 

Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia the day before. The snow was bright green and sour, so he ate it. So tell me, what is the point of this? Is it really sometimes a bit

 

Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia the day before. The snow was bright green and sour, so he ate it. So tell me, what is the point of this? Is it really sometimes a bit difficult to fly

 

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Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia the day before. The snow was bright green and sour, so he ate it. So tell me, what is the point of this? Is it really sometimes a bit difficult to fly a glowworm that tries to eat

 

Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia the day before. The snow was bright green and sour, so he ate it. So tell me, what is the point of this? Is it really sometimes a bit difficult to fly a glowworm that tries to eat Snickers bars? Anyway

 

Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia the day before. The snow was bright green and sour, so he ate it. So tell me, what is the point of this? Is it really sometimes a bit difficult to fly a glowworm that tries to eat Snickers bars? Anyway, I guess it is kinda impossible

 

Once I had a shiny, new, big head that occasionally said don't let go and never give chocolate to rabbits. Crazy but true, the radioactive chocolate was so boring. This big head, although technologically advanced, would, on occasion, think of really foolish forum games. This led to complete control of his evil twin who was addicted to collecting dust. But one day, the day ends. But the next day was the previous day all over again and I couldn't find my wallet which contained my radioactive Snickers bar.
The bar thought: "shine little glowworm,and fly!" So the glowworm, deciding to explode, flew into a time vortex, eventually landing in Siberia the day before. The snow was bright green and sour, so he ate it. So tell me, what is the point of this? Is it really sometimes a bit difficult to fly a glowworm that tries to eat Snickers bars? Anyway, I guess it is kinda impossible to eat the